Bad transition, bad arrangement and that make story mesh up, and top of that bad translation!!! But, the plot is not so bad if the mangaka arrange his/her story more brilliant.
There is more bizarre SAO story than this thing. All of heroine raped by doctor, while Kirito raped by his sister. The last page is where slut Asuna (she pregnant, using naked veil covered in cum) and random doctor married each other. I forget the title.
This teacher never rode in crowded trains in original story. She always choose to take less passenger train in early morning and late night. Well, its Hentai Adaptation, why not make some change.
But, the plot is not so bad if the mangaka arrange his/her story more brilliant.
Well, its Hentai Adaptation, why not make some change.