>>1257402 @ Anonymous218129 I agree 100%
The art is 10 / 10!
The story is 10 / 10!
Plot (the usual hentai) 10 / 10!
Revisiting this doujin is worthwhile, especially for new artists looking to explore the world of adult content.
I really appreciate the creativity of the artist/author in genuinely not simply making it a loli porn with zero ending just pure raw, carnal sex without meaning. ...It's evident that there was a ton of thought put into this.
IT's not bad. Decent. Wholesome. Not hardcore loli sex, rape, gore, vore...etc-etc.
If you're going to do BDSM / Bondage / etc-etc right the correct way, than by all means please do use this as a case study for all future Mangaka artists out there!
Would reccomend, would re-read, would use as reference to master the nuances of drawing smut, and over all buy the manga to use as a how-to guide. This one is by far my favorite from Hakaba.
100 / 100 -- The Art & Writing i.e. short stories,packed a punch for being full-of-little to almost no plot needed just enough sprinkled in her-and-there to keep the perverted readers' full & satiated by the ingredients the artist jam packed into this hentai.
11/10 would re-read again and again because simple plot is done more with less dialogue, than least appealing sex scenes covered in a ton of texts no one gives a shit about.
I give it an overall -4 out of 10!
10 / 10 for plot
10 / 10 for readability
10 / 10 will read again.
Also, this is extremely ideal for those who want to get into doing adult smut!
I agree 100%
The art is 10 / 10!
The story is 10 / 10!
Plot (the usual hentai) 10 / 10!
Revisiting this doujin is worthwhile, especially for new artists looking to explore the world of adult content.
7/10 for art
Censorship ruined it so...
10/10 for originality
0/0 for the re-read factor, it started getting repetitive near the end!
Arts somewhat decent, but everything else simply made little to zero fucking sense. *Shrugs* -- It's something forgettable.
I really appreciate the creativity of the artist/author in genuinely not simply making it a loli porn with zero ending just pure raw, carnal sex without meaning. ...It's evident that there was a ton of thought put into this.
IT's not bad. Decent. Wholesome. Not hardcore loli sex, rape, gore, vore...etc-etc.
Art is top-tier
Plot is wholesome
Would re-read again.
If you're going to do BDSM / Bondage / etc-etc right the correct way, than by all means please do use this as a case study for all future Mangaka artists out there!
Would reccomend, would re-read, would use as reference to master the nuances of drawing smut, and over all buy the manga to use as a how-to guide. This one is by far my favorite from Hakaba.
I may change my review later
Would re-read again!!!!!!
10/10 -- would re-read again
Would re-read again...
11/10 would re-read again and again because simple plot is done more with less dialogue, than least appealing sex scenes covered in a ton of texts no one gives a shit about.
-9/10 would not re-read ever again.
I too agree that this one is a 7/10 in art and 4/10 in writing that caused me to lose brain cells reading this.
Overall ::-20/-20 would NOT re-read again
10/10 --would NEVER read again
Artist delivers.
Art 10/10
Script 10/10.
I would re-read again.
10/10 would re-read!