Far too sad. My emotions, feelsbadman. When her master tells her she enjoyed the time they spent together, and then at the end when we see her still hanging onto her masters collar. Delete this
A story where the sadist girls KILL A GUY through overworking him, then get whats coming to them? Decent, although the cigarettes part is way to my disliking... Still bummed that the original dude dies...
Page 62, really? When the girl he likes confronts the head of the public committee about what they've been doing, the head chairwoman says that they'll pretend its HIS ABNORMAL LUST that was the problem? How would that help him? That would only hurt her image of him. Wow wtf? It turns out okay the next page, but she chairwoman is just trying to hide her wrongdoing. And he goes along with it. Extremely frustrating. Angering even. Wow. Didn't read the next chapter yet.
Thanks, saved a bro
And she thought she could break the enchantment on the dress after she put it on, and then unless I missed it she never even tried... What?
2/10 for story, 9/10 before animals...
For me, the master/slave relationship knocks it down a point though. Another if he lets the same thing happen with the girl at the end.