I think was one of the best I've read. The characters were awesome. I loved their personalities. The story and writing was great. I was so cute and sweet, I had to double up on the insulin. Three thumbs up...
>>49421 @ Anonymous Reply. No, I'm not dumb, nor gay. Are you? Most porn contains a man - you read it too- does that make you gay? I just get tired of seeing the same things over and over. I'd like to see something different. I prefer women too, especially lolis and cougars, but I also like to see other things as well. My mind is a super highway and complex instead of a country road and simple. I have a huge imagination, and it likes to be fed. Don't ask stupid questions. It is better to look the fool than to open your mouth and confirm it...
Isn't it every old phart's dream to be just sitting in the park and to be asked to have sex with a very young girl? Of course... Why else would spend the whole day just sitting in the park????
That was a wonderful and beautiful story. What made it even better was, "cock," "pussy," "cum," "dick," "cunt," nor "fuck" were mentioned even once. I hate those where that's all they say. In all of my experience over the last 40+ yrs, neither I, nor any of my partners, ever said any of those words either (well, maybe "fuck," "cum," or "dick" a few times, but not often). Thanks for keeping it real. Definitely favored.
A lot of this isn't even translated, so I don't know if it's any of what you guys are saying or not. I think someone just threw some words in and what is understandable isn't the literal translation. I think this should be classified as a rewrite. I don't think it's a very good one either.
>>47543 @ ZERO But, 2D lolis, That's all I crave! I'd travel far across the Milky Way. To my master, I become a slave! Till we meet again, Some other day.
... I apologize for going Van Halen here... :p Note: Love Comes Walking In, Lyrics by Van Halen, Album 5150, 1986
Well, part one sucked more than a black hole... this one was actually pretty decent. I can actually say it moved to the positive side of the rating scale and ranks higher than a crappy rewrite. The vocabulary was more mature and intelligible, the story stayed on one line and was easy to follow, but most of all made a modicum of sense. It's still a shit sandwich, just not the soggy kind...
>>46925 @ ZERO -too late, already read -clicked "view all," relived nightmare -still unable to get it up after reading this yesterday, so no fapping, and no happy thanks anyway :P
Reply. No, I'm not dumb, nor gay. Are you? Most porn contains a man - you read it too- does that make you gay?
I just get tired of seeing the same things over and over. I'd like to see something different. I prefer women too, especially lolis and cougars, but I also like to see other things as well. My mind is a super highway and complex instead of a country road and simple. I have a huge imagination, and it likes to be fed.
Don't ask stupid questions. It is better to look the fool than to open your mouth and confirm it...
Don't you mean...
wait for it,
wait for it,
loli-gagging???
But, 2D lolis,
That's all I crave!
I'd travel far across the Milky Way.
To my master,
I become a slave!
Till we meet again,
Some other day.
... I apologize for going Van Halen here... :p
Note: Love Comes Walking In, Lyrics by Van Halen, Album 5150, 1986
Yeah, so, I have a business suit fetish as well as my LOLIS!!!!
I'd love to say, "Yes, bring it," but with my luck, I'd either wake up a vegetable, or wake up in hell... aka, this manga... :P
-too late, already read
-clicked "view all," relived nightmare
-still unable to get it up after reading this yesterday, so no fapping, and no happy
thanks anyway :P