I didnt like this that much honestly. The art through me off.
>>6678 @ Anonymous1952
Might because ive never enjoyed this tag but, I didn't like it much either.
Good stuff omg. Love the chill cops though.
The girls pretty hot so im not surprised the dude went to such lengths. Shes surprisingly fickle though. To bad the son didn't have the balls to take her for himself, to stop her from working and get off his ass.
"You reap what you sow" I guess *sigh*

Honestly, I feel like there is much more I want to say but, I have written enough as it is and
im, not sure myself what.
Now that it has happened. What does he intend to do. Can he live on in this relationship. Is he really willing to do that. The dude was crying man. And the girl didn't even react. I want to see a sequel. There probably wont be one. But, I want to know how he intends to go forward from here.

I mean seriously, it would be one thing if he liked it but he clearly didn't towards the end. He got more than what he payed for but theres no refunds. How do you react to a situation like that? I feel sorry for the guy to be honest. I get a slightly disgusted feeling having completed this.

If anyone ever bothers to read my long ass Comment/Rant be sure to tell me your opinion on this doujin and any of the things I said. I would honestly like to know what other people thought/felt when they read this.
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He cant just ignore all that and pretend it never happened. He could if it was just sex. Then maybe they could stop and go back to how they were. But, she said she loved the other dude and a bunch of other stuff that cant be taken back. He cant make her stop because it would only result in the marriage breaking down. Its either he lives with his mistake forever even though it made him cry or he divorces her and vows to never make the same mistake again.

She didnt even seem concerned when he was crying, (she was clearly guilty, but thats not going to stop her from continuing) hes been disregarded completely. The marriage is already over so why could he only hug her?

Well anyway, thats my rant over. Again the thing that bothered me most was the ending not everything else that happened but how he reacted to it all. Some of scenes were quite hot but I was too focused on the story to care. I cant blame him for doing this. I am not a cuckold myself but, I understand how it is to have a curiosity that can be more harm than good. But,
This is so fucked up that it surpasses reason. I have watched and read quite a lot of ntr at this point. Not by choice but its such a popular genre you cant really avoid it and it can be quite hot sometimes. However, this time it was too much. I expected it would be though so its my own fault for reading anyway, but my curiosity cant be easily tamed. Much like our unfortunate protagonist.

I think out of the entire doujin. What bothered me the most was the ending. Our MC made the foolish mistake of trying to pursue a fantasy that should have stayed in his head but, couldn't handle the consequences. And when she comes home after betraying him both physically and emotionally all he can do is hug her. Its obvious the marriage wont be the same, hes going to remain a cuck through out the marriage and if he hated that enough to even cry about it then why didn't he do anything? no divorce, no conversation, just a hug and "welcome back"?
This was way more interesting than I expected. Quite a story.
>>7497 @ Anonymous
I have not read it myself so I cant confirm whether thats true or not (I was trying my best to have the patience to wait until it gets translated however long that may take) but, I wouldn't be too surprised if it was. There were plenty of foreshadowing leading up to it. I cant go into detail just too complicated to explain but, I feel like the author was building up the suspense for that very reveal.
>>5973 @ ZERO
True, it must be quite stressful. The thing that worries me though. He had an erection during the fantasy and by the way he imagines it, it almost seems like he likes the idea. Towards the end he does say he is "glad it was a dream" and his frequent expressions show more horror than arousal at the prospect so it could have just been a males natural reaction but I still feel that it needs to be confirmed. I want a bit more expansion of his character.

You could only go crazy at this idea if you didn't want it.
Edit: Interestingly enough though I found a comment on another website under this very same doujin that said "The struggle for NTR fetishists is real. It's always way hotter in fantasy than reality" Makes me really curious how he would react if she really was/is cheating. There is so many valid questions here being asked such as: why did she hang up so suddenly after asking how long he would be? why is she so close to the "friend"? why sit next to him and not her husband? "you were really intense today" is the sexy normally boring? was she really just taking a bath? was the dude only pretending to grab a spoon when something really was happening under the counter? Did he come back too late? Are they really all just delusions? (with all these questions no wonder a person would lose their sanity, especially if deep down its not something they want at all)

The fact that a Hentai story leaves me so invested is truly astounding. (CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2!!!)
The Genius who wrote this deserves praise. Its so tense, the delusions seem so real until he wakes up and they bleed into reality so smoothly that even the reader starts to get paranoid along with the MC. Its especially bad because; some of his reasons to be suspicious towards the end are perfectly reasonable. Why is his wife being so "touchy feely" with someone? Even if it is her best friend thats not okay and certainly suspicious. Or worse, how she sits next to the "friend" instead of him.

"is there something im not seeing here"

This character feels super relatable and you can really connect to his struggle. Its a unique plot that delves into the insecurities of a man quite well, while skidding on the outskirts of a typical ntr plot. "is this reality or just another delusion" In only 59 pages I care about this dude more than almost every character I have ever encountered whether that be Anime, manga or Doujin. This review probabl doesn't do it justice but, I look forward to part2
I like it. The dialogues a bit shit though.
Love it when he took control. Beautiful...
Normally, I dislike femdom but there are always exceptions and this is one of those exceptions. Shota femdom is inherently not that bad anyway and the way it was executed was super hot and quite satisfying.
Anonymous3033 on
Not bad. I really dislike the intense penis cencor though.
As messed up as the story is especially because as usual, they decided to use the ugliest possible person for such a plot the sex scenes were hot because of the artstyle and how attractive the girls are so definitely not as bad as I first expected. However, the sudden appearance of that ugly shit is still fucked up and cannot be excused. Who thinks up this stuff?
Anonymous3033 on
Uploaded twice. Seriously?
I must admit when I first read all the comments I thought "please, it cant be that bad" but now, having read it...

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